Power Corrupts

            Politics can be a dirty business. Those with money can “buy” lowered taxes and rulings that favor their business. Those without power are often either ignored or disregarded, their needs not important to those seeking influence. A politician will appeal to those without, promising all kinds a magical thinking, but once elected, serve only those with money.

            Lawyers are often demeaned for being “criminals” themselves, especially when they take on clients who consistently violate the laws. All this is done thanks to hefty payouts and the notoriety that defending such clients falls upon the law firm.

School administrators who are supposed to be there for students and staff, can fire teachers with very little cause, as long as it takes place before the teacher earns tenure. It doesn’t take much to rid oneself of staff who ask questions, challenge decisions, and speak up against what they believe are injustices. A few negative evaluations can destroy a teachers career, if the charges are serious enough.

Your task is to write a story in which power corrupts. The wanting of power, or seeking power, or utilizing power to get what your character wants must play a major role.

Have fun with this one.

The Ending

Your reader wants to feel something at the conclusion of the story. They can feel happy because the characters fell in love, or they might be sad because someone died in a terrible car accident. If the story was a thriller, they might carry a fear with them for a few days, concerned that something similar might happen to them.

A good ending gives food for thought. The reader needs to process the journey that the character just traveled. The reader might think back over all the events that affected the main character, sometimes wishing that something different had happened.

Imagine how your reader would feel if your character checks into a rehab center to due to a drug addiction. He gets cured, but when he leaves, returns to those same drugs.

Perhaps your character receives an award for bravery or she is promoted to CEO or makes a major scientific discovery that cures cancer.

These are the stories that make the reader sigh.

Your task is to write a solid story with a beginning, middle and end. Challenge the character in ways that cause her to falter, and then recover. When you get to the ending, ask yourself how the story made you feel.

Rewrite the ending, adding clarification or details to give depth, something that will cause a reader to pause.

Have fun with this one.