Something Hidden

Everyone has secrets, right? Perhaps she jumped, naked, into a river while friends were watching. Maybe he stole a packet of pens back in fifth grade, when there wasn’t money to buy them. A group of friends might have banded together to cheat fellow classmates in a game of whack-a-mole.

Some secrets are never meant to be shared. Imagine telling your future partner about your naked stunt? What if the boy applies for a government job and the theft comes up during vetting? Or if the group is found out, but only one or two are charged?

Our task is to write a story in which a secret plays an important role.

Have fun with this one.

Needing Help

            We often need the help of others. I’m short, so if there’s something in a high cabinet that I can’t reach, my husband helps. Or if my hands aren’t strong enough to open a bottle, he does it for me.

            When I taught, I often consulted with peers on how best to present a text or how to initiate class discussions. As an older adult, I look to peers, or if they can’t help, I’ll go online.

            What if your character was forced to rely on another person for something important? Choose something impactful, such as installing a new database, or climbing a mountain. Helpmates can be friends or office-mates. Other teachers or someone in a store.

            Have fun with this one.

Mood Hints

            Something has happened. Your character is in an unfamiliar room or situation. We need to know her mood. How do you show that?

            First place her in a specific room, such as a bedroom, office, study or classroom. Establish mood through description of where it is happening or has happened. Use props such as items of furniture, clothes, weather, climate or a period of history.

            Have the camera pan in on the scene. What do you want the readers to see? To understand? What props are important to establish mood?

            Remember that everything is important in story.

Set events in motion.

Have fun with this one.

Story Starters

If you’re stuck and can’t think of a way to begin, choose one of these:

  1. Describe a scene using the colors of the walls.
  2. Begin with a sound such as the coffee grinder or the ticking of a clock
  3. Have your character frustrated with a stovetop burner that suddenly quits working.
  4. Not everyone likes pets, but describing the nose prints a dog has left on the sliding glass door might be entertaining.
  5. Perhaps your character is fascinated by a scratch running down the wood paneling in a fancy business office.
  6. Or the crooked pictures hanging on a wall.

After you’ve chosen your beginning, write!

Have fun with this one.

Lines to Incorporate

Here’s a writing challenge:

Choose one of these beginning lines to start your story:

  1. Every night I see you.
  2. Last week they rode the bus to…
  3. My husband and I lived…
  4. I am twenty…
  5. If I stood on the chair, I…

Begin writing. Somewhere inside of the story, you must include one of these lines:

  1. Oh, but look how dirty…
  2. Suspicion, doubt and jealousy…
  3. Luck’s nothing but chance, but…
  4. Stay with me until stars…
  5. Clouds built up over…

Have fun with this one!

Animal Antics

            There are animal lovers and those who’d prefer they stay far away. There are creatures that make good pets and those that should remain in the wild. Taking into consideration your attitude toward animals, if your character feels as you do, what would happen if an animal suddenly appears in the story?

            Your task is to write a story in which, somewhere along the way, an animal plays a starring role. Imagine the villain rescuing a stray kitten. The hero sweeping down from the sky to pull a donkey out of a quagmire.

            Have fun with this one.

The Twist

            Picture yourself on vacation, somewhere you’ve always wanted to see. You stand in line, with hundreds, waiting your turn to enter. You bought your ticket online. Planned everything, including how best to get there, where to stay, restaurants you’ve been dreaming of visiting.

            Something catches your eye. Something so tempting that you jump out of line and chase after it.

            Twists in storyline provide unexpected thrills. The reader is plodding along, following your character, perhaps even becoming a tad board because she is so predictable. When the cautious character follows a sketchy looking individual, or buys a thousand-dollar watch, or decides to jump out of a plane, readers read on, wanting to understand why the change.

            Your task is to write a story in which your character does something quite unusual and unpredictable.

Have fun with this one.

Lost and Not Found

            Imagine what might happen if your character lost something important, such as a wallet, passport, or credit card. How would she react? What would she do?

            Would she search through her purse, possibly dumping the contents onto the floor of a store? Retrace her steps? Call a friend to come help?

            There are countless numbers of scenarios to play out!

            Your task is to write a story in which something is lost.

            Have fun with this one.

Antagonist Wins

            Most writers understand that their protagonist must change in some way, perhaps in many ways, as the story progresses. Event cause affect, which leads to the character growing or changing as a result.

            A good antagonist also changes. Give this character a new skill, strength, or personality trait. Perhaps make it something positive, something that might alter the antagonist’s outlook on the world.

            What if a kidnapper gets kidnapped? Might that give her a new perspective? What if a bank robber gets robbed? Or a thief had her house burglarized?

            Your task is to write a story in which the antagonist changes, just as the protagonist does.

            Have fun with this one.